KEY TERMS
The following advice should help you write a Personal Statement which is easy to read and is professionally written. Read the following advice to help you connect your sentences and paragraphs together as well as help you vary the language you use in the Personal Statement."In addition to my work experience I have also gained valuable skills throughout my voluntary work."
"As well as my involvement in team games I am also keen in playing individually competitive sport."
"My involvement in the school voluntary programme has reinforced my decision to study a degree in Nursing."
"My decision to study a degree in Economics has been strengthened by my enjoyment and success in my A level course."
"Further more, I am particularly suited to a degree in Chemistry because of my love of the subject and my keen interest to further my knowledge of the subject."
"Besides my involvement with sports I am also involved in amateur dramatics."
"Being involved in the voluntary work programme not to mention my work experience has provided an opportunity to work with a diverse range of people."
"Although I have taken part in classical music concerts, more recently I have decided to learn to play the piano."
"The opportunity to play in the school football team enabled me to work as part of a team."
"The work experience provided me with an opportunity to work with a range of people."
"The opportunity to work with people was provided by my work experience."
ADVICE ABOUT USING ‘I’
Beginning many sentences with ‘I’ is very easy to do, especially when writing about yourself. Instead, try to create varied sentences with a range of alternative starting points:
| DO NOT WRITE | INSTEAD WRITE |
| I am captain of the
hockey team I enjoy playing sport I am studying A levels in I enjoy socialising I have taken part in I have gained a number of skills |
Being captain of the
Hockey team…… Having enjoyed playing football…… My A level subjects have…… Socialising is important to me because…. Taking part in…. The skills I have gained from…. |